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Originally Posted by Surfin the Susquehanna
LoL... As I was reading I thought to myself... excellent content, great detail, but the flow was a bit "off". I still enjoyed reading it. It was a breath of fresh air from the norm of the posts I submit and read on here. You should have posted it before you handed it in... maybe we could have helped you with the technical structure and flow. For sure you would have gotten an A......
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what did you notice that didnt flow? and thanks for the complments.