Re: For your review (please be critical)
the bee could use a little work, area where you tie in wing and the head is bunched, hard to tie a tippet to.
The soft hackle is very nice, could start back on hook shank a wee bit more (over top of barb) other wise very nice.
The midge looks good except for the tail, too long shorten it by 2/3, midges have almost no tail and most times not just an appendage or gills there.
I did not escape.....they gave me a day pass!
from the outer edge of nowhere
fly tying and fishing Gillie..