Steve I'd carry on. You ended the hackle in the perfect spot to start your wing. The gp tippet veil on the tail is extra juicy, the butt looks good and the tinsel work is fine. The throat is a skosh long.....but we'll call it a spey variant. When you get the wing set in.....you can stroke it back and it'll look great. I'd opt out of the gp tippet underwing or simply use cut fibers......looking good bud.